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WindWalker
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0 posted 2007-11-27 07:52 PM


Night shadows dissipate
in dawn's enchanted songs;
of nature's carefree ways.
Gently she arouses
dormant passions,
intense emotions.

A brilliant light bursts
in my mind's eye:
I see beyond the tunnel
along a path long abandoned.
Now offered freely to my feet,
I choose to  follow
this path of life,
this statement of love.

In her garden of flowers;
amidst  fragrances unnamed;
my soulmate, my true love
rises to greet me
and remembrance sweeps over me
as her embrace consumes
infinite love's desire.

If I were to be asked,
‘What is life about?’
I would respond simply by reading
this poem.

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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1 posted 2007-11-27 09:59 PM


I especially love the first 3 lines!:

"Night shadows dissipate
in dawn's enchanted songs;
of nature's carefree ways!"

Applause!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2007-11-28 02:37 AM


I would respond by reading this poem too.
                                  Ida

Flipped
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since 2007-11-28
Posts 8

3 posted 2007-11-28 03:40 AM


A VERY nice poem, it is really well done
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