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What does a man seek
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What does a man seek |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~*~What does a man seek?~*~ What does a man seek? A woman that is sleek , and totally meek? He wants her to have things that make him reach his peak Beyond that, nothing is said Or would ever be Who ever said that a man can adore thee Without referring to himself first for the key? Who ever said that a man could ever love the mind Without the body first to be entwined? Who ever dare to say That a man in love, is a man great in any way? For out of love he could be, in an instant and flee His love is a thing of feather That flies away, And quickly wither Like a dark rose, that can never be The analogy as fair as it might be, can so refer to thee For in darkness he'd wrap you up eternally Or it would never be. ---- *It's been a long time...I hope that you'd like this one read it on my blog http://last-drops.livejournal.com/1006.html Thank you  "Oh...me!Oh Life! Of the questions |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed Melody ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A man can be as fickle as a pickle! Men beware! Women eat pickles! lol Good to see you posting again!  EA |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I want to be loved for who I am, not what he wants me to be, Unconditional love..I agree! ~ARH  You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Artic wind Thank you --- Earth Angel It's good to be here again ~hugs~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A Romantic Heart Yes...unconditional love but could it be?? thank you |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Nice poem. I read it putting "her" in the poem instead. Now I can realte to that! Nice wrire. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Thank you ---- I read it putting "her" in the poem instead. Now I can realte to that! Her??? Is it as baffeling as unfair as "Him"?? I think not...Lol Thank you |
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