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Open Poetry #41

Dancing In The Rain

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-11-27 02:44 PM

Dancing In The Rain

As this new day begins perhaps
you will wonder if it will be
a good day or another bad day.

Hopefully the joys of today
will overcome any traces
of lingering pain.

Hopefully happiness and love
will join with you and there
will be dancing in the rain.

JamesLee
27November
2007

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2007-11-27 03:55 PM

I like your poems better, James when there is no woman directly involved. This one is a good example.
Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-11-28 01:55 AM

delightful James.... dancing in the rain... that would be a nice thing to do I think

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-11-28 02:41 AM

quote:
Hopefully the joys of today
will overcome any traces
of lingering pain.

A very beautiful wish to begin a day with, dear James!

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-11-28 04:18 AM

Thank you Marchmadness, Roniece and Margherita for the nice responses...
Marchmadness I'm glad that you liked this one...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-28 05:20 PM

A beautiful poem JamesMichael

!

ARCTIC WIND

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