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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-11-27 11:14 AM



Two, Us

One spontaneous moment
In a repertoire of romantic score
Indigenous to the fertile landscapes
Where there resides each at the deepest core

Only God directs my footsteps more
And smiles on my hands within your hands

My ear against your heart
Listening and coaxing up and down the scale
Playing keys in fingertips that breath responds
Sipping on the scent of gentle, fragrant sail

Oh, to call your name into the dawn so pale
And glisten in your nectar warm

Pulling muscle to the earth
Standing fast and shuddering with spirit strong
Stating fact, in front of memory so kind
Lifting up, embracing hard in feathered song

Sure of where we both belong
Two, us; blessed in compliment

Harmony upon descent
To us, the toast of time that does cement
A knowing, ever growing
Ebb and flowing
Two, Us


Copyright Kkh 11/27/07

© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-11-27 12:10 PM


An amazingly beautiful work, dear TD, every line exceptional!!

A keeper!

Love,
Margherita

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
2 posted 2007-11-27 09:26 PM


feathery and light is your pen; as if the words of your heart are transferred directly to paper. beautiful penning as always.
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
3 posted 2007-11-28 03:43 PM


fine writing!! beautiful.

enjoyed

Tomtoo

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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4 posted 2007-11-28 04:21 PM


Wonderful flow of romatic words...James
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-28 05:28 PM


Beautiful

ARCTIC WIND

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