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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-11-27 06:25 AM



when the bellies of rivers
are but caspian gypsies
rhyming their momentary migration

before the silent time windows
when your mind is drawn down
like the shadows of nuns

draping night sided dunes
with the hatred of solace
in their peaceful armor

then is the fragile time
for dark edges to linger
lest the whet of wet liquor

ruin the lonely with love
______________

daark



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1 posted 2007-11-27 09:00 AM


"ruin the lonely with love"


gosh that is a wonderful line!

very much enjoyed this D

Sunshine
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2 posted 2007-11-27 09:11 AM


Such warm advice...

smiling here...




Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2007-11-27 10:02 AM


yep...that line did it for me..

nicely done.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
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Margherita
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4 posted 2007-11-27 10:30 AM


quote:
before the silent time windows
when your mind is drawn down
like the shadows of nuns



You dress your thoughts in such extraordinary words, dear D.!

Loved this.

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2007-11-27 02:09 PM


What a beautiful way to be ruined....sigh....Lovely darkone...  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-11-27 06:56 PM


before the silent time windows
when your mind is drawn down
like the shadows of nuns

yes, I know about the shadows of nuns Mr Daark... my school years were filled with them! enjoyed  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2007-11-27 09:47 PM


ms suesea, thanks babe for the eyes and the reply.

___________

ms sun, thanks lady of warm for your visit.

_____________

ms susan c, thanks lady friend for the read

_____________

ms mar, thanks for your walk in and look around touch ms

_____________

ms gs, thanks gentle one for the read and reply

____________

ms R & B, thank you for looking up from down under..I am available for confessions on most days you know..?

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8 posted 2007-11-29 06:30 PM


Perfectly beautiful.

A

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-11-30 06:23 AM


ms az, thank you babe!!
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