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Rick
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Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2007-11-25 03:32 AM



Undecided day
Time goes by too quickly then
Over and regret

Sing to my heart dear
Touch a place that is barren
Seed again a flower

Beauty stares toward me
Its wears and scent deliver
Framed to hang in thought

Death the ending road
Heaven our hope and reprieve
What if they lied

© Copyright 2007 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-11-25 03:39 AM


Undecided day
Time goes by too quickly then
Over and regret

beautifully put Rick.. time is a thief and regrets hopefully are few...   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rick
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2 posted 2007-11-25 05:28 AM


Hi again Roniece, days lost cannot be returned, regrets will always surface, it is the acceptance of what we do and who we are I think that makes all the difference.

Regret not master
Choices come from moments thought
New day brings surprise

Thank you once again for your reply my friend, as always, very much appreciated.

Rick

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2007-11-25 01:37 PM


Framed to hang in thought


love your choice of words, Rick

M

LindsayP
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4 posted 2007-11-25 08:12 PM



An unusual write from you my friend

but enjoyed just the same. have a great day

And take care.

Lindsay

Rick
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5 posted 2007-11-26 12:59 PM


Dear M, funny how the words just come that way isn't it, I wrote the line and enjoyed what I had created as well, thank you so much for your visit and reply my friend.

Hi Lindsay, thought I would just put together some Haiku's, amazing how much can be said in very few words, I quite enjoy this style, thank you for visiting again my friend, always appreciated.

To you both my friends, have a wonderful day and take care.

Rick

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