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on the heels of wintry couplet
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on the heels of wintry couplet |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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November came reelin' on the heels of a wintry couplet chauvinist winds twisted brittle limbs breaking the tell of silence winter yowled a tell-tale sing snow well over the palings the valley was white and glowed in the night - but there was nought to be said over evening morning burst in tangled skein the face of winter teasing Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ [This message has been edited by lucky (11-18-2007 09:55 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed lucky ARCTIC WIND |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love the teasing of winter...and look forward to more~~ M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Dale...Your eyes see like no others I have ever read on the pages pour. I'm sure glad to see your poetry again. Brrrrr.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed this wintery tease be it morning, evening, or night.  Love & November Light, EA |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ "morning burst in tangled skein" Oh my ... *sigh*~ Breathtaking beauty beheld~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love a great last line, and we all know that you need a good hook to open with too--but since you already know I'm whacked, I'm not afraid to say that you serve up GREAT poetry sandwiches. All the stuff inbetween is just as yummy! Back to the top you!  |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
AW - thanks again. nakdthoughts - always a welcome sight. Martie/Sis - you know I love inspiration. EA - I'll keep that light shinning. Marge - a sigh from marge... that's a big deal. Karen - are you feelin' dizzy again..? You guys are all so great - and you know I love ya. best friend best finds - dale |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, how I love winter poems! They give me deliriums of delight! So as I come to the windows, the doors, peering at the sky for white clouds, and checking how cold it is, I can always depend on you to be beside me, waiting too! A very special companionship. I treasure every word of this poem, my dearest love. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I enjoyed the word sounds of this poem. It's very pleasurable to read, and filled with imagery for the senses. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You have fast become one of my favorite reads here. Always brings a smile of satisfaction to my lips. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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