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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2007-11-23 08:08 AM


My pen is bleeding on the paper,
As love is bleeding in my heart.
Each word's the bare truth -
Put these words to music,
Play this music on the strings of my soul,
If you don't tear them, I'm yours.

If you see me dying,
Will you hold my hand through this hell?
Will you save me like you did once?
You know where to find the way
To the temple of my hope.
And I don't know...

If only I had died tomorrow,
Would you've turned back time,
So that tomorrow'd never come?
And if I asked you
To kill me with your bare hands,
Just not with your indifference... would you?

I can't breathe the air of fear.
I'm suffocating... will you hold me in your arms
To chase the fear away?
Will you breathe life into me?
Will you forgive me the weakness of one day
If I'm your shield for all the lifetime?

If I could live an hour of your life,
Dwell in your inner world that's just your own,
I'd turn to real your most precious dreams.
And if you realize
I love you with each ounce of my heart,
Will you ever say goodbye?

© Copyright 2007 April A. - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-11-23 08:32 AM


"My pen is bleeding on the paper"

~ and it shows. You are able to convey this very well.


EA

Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
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2 posted 2007-11-23 08:44 AM


oh wow..The power and emotion is this has left me speechless.
Amazing..

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-23 02:28 PM


Nice...very nice...James
A Beautiful Disaster
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4 posted 2007-11-27 01:01 PM


Thanks!
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