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Kurai Kumo
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since 2005-06-23
Posts 32
Houston, Texas, USA

0 posted 2007-11-26 06:35 PM



As the sun goes down in the western sky,
I crawl into bed and begin to cry,
Layed my heart on the line again for the second time,
I took that step across that same old line,
Did it all for you to see,
Can't seem to quit beating up myself lately,
Why does my life seem to crumble so damn early,
I remember being told this saying,
You don't have to worry about being hurt if your not trying,
No past,
no future,
no problems,
If you have to look in the past you'll notice it all,
Then you will start to fall,
Will begin to understand the problems from the past,
It will happen all too fast,
So if I don't try at all I don't have to worry about making mistakes

© Copyright 2007 Keith A Rusler - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-11-27 12:35 PM


This hurts. Don't look too much into the past and do not worry to make mistakes. LIVE! As much as a heart hurts, as much it is able to heal and open up again.

You did a nice job.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-11-27 02:30 PM


If you are breathing you will make mistakes...but you can learn from your mistakes...and learn to make better choices...which will not guarantee that you won't have future pain...because anothers choices can hurt us...this is life...James
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