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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
You're Wonderful Do you even know you're wonderful I just wanna hold you near wisper in your ear you're beautiful Too sweet for words prettiest song I ever heard you're the one in the world one and only girl I'm longing for Listen I've done everything I've been everywhere oh but the only, only thing I want is someone who cares to run my fingers through her hair someone to be devoted to and honey, I want that to be you yeah Your eyes speak to me honey brown melodies think about you all the time your grace never leaves my mind 'cause you're the one Bet you don't even know you're wonderful you wash away my blues I just wanna be with you you're everything you're wonderful so beautiful ooh wonderful Much too sweet for words prettiest song I ever heard you're the one in the world one and only girl I'm longing for ooh wonderful you know you're wonderful I just wanted to let you know ~(for Sarah)~ "Hey, it's me, I'm dynamite and I don't know why" -- Van Morrison, 'Sweet Thing' [This message has been edited by soul drifter (11-15-2007 12:16 AM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Sarah is one lucky lady - and your poem is wonderful. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your eyes speak to me honey brown melodies think about you all the time your grace never leaves my mind 'cause you're the one A sweet and lovely outpour of your heart in love. Did Sarah blush in joy when she read it? Love, Margherita  |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
No, she doesn't know. It's one-sided, really. But nonetheless real to me. Thanks for the kind comments everyone; I think this is much more straightforward than what I usually write and I hear it as sort of a Sam Cooke slow R&B ballad kind of thing. "Hey, it's me, I'm dynamite and I don't know why" -- Van Morrison, 'Sweet Thing' |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's so beautiful, I wish this was a song (I would listen to it over and over)...I think you should give this to Sarah...what a romantic heart you have! I bet it would melt her...would me that's for sure  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I agree, it sounds like a song. Maybe you should sing it to her! Beautiful... |
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chickoo007 Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70India |
Its indeed romantic!!NOW is the time just tell her yaar!!!!!!!(Me sure its gonna be a YESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!) BEST OF LUCK....... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very romantic ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice flow of words of appreciation...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Indeed, Sarah must be "Wonderful" to have inspired such a sweet love poem.  Wishing you both much happiness!  EA |
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