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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-11-13 03:59 PM


In Dark Chambers

Why worry so much
about finding love,
love can also find you,
and if its true it will stay,
if its not it will go away,
lamenting the day it
made a fool of you.

For the difference
between a foolish love
and a real love,
is like the difference
between day and night.

A fools love hides secrets
in dark chambers,
a real love
blooms in the light.

JamesLee
11November
2007


[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-14-2007 02:22 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-11-13 04:14 PM


May all the love that comes your way in life, blossom into full bloom in full light!


Linda

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-11-13 04:54 PM


You really have developed a philosopher's quality lately, dear James.

Love is light, it shines even in Dark Chambers, otherwise it's not love, I would say.

Enjoyed your ponderings.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-13 06:25 PM


Thank you for the wonderful responses Earth Angel and Margherita...James
Marchmadness
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4 posted 2007-11-13 09:06 PM


Nice write, James. I tend to think that love that hides in dark chambers is not worth the effort.
                                 Ida

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-11-13 09:27 PM


JamesMichael-

Love will always come your way !

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-11-14 02:23 PM


Thank you Marchmadness and Artic Wind for the wonderful responses...James
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