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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the nights are longer now that the days have shortened and waiting for you is a line of ticking clocks talking useless but then you smile from nowhere stuck in traffic with a moment to pretend we both are there and that I am driving reckless with no hands on the wheel and that you have your shoes off barefoot on the dash board dancing naked ankled with your prince then you slip and let me know you when I was not at all expecting to fall into your lady tree love from such an unintentional attitude but you caught me with my guard down ___________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
darkdaddy, this is soft, lovely, and a smile maker.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I do love the romantic side of you, dear D. ... but "with no hands on the wheel" looks like a double risk!  Very lovely and made me smile too. Love, Margherita  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yup... your softer side is sure nice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
warm smiles especially this.... with no hands on the wheel and that you have your shoes off barefoot on the dash board dancing naked ankled with your prince brings back youthfulled memories..... Nice to read you Lee J. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"barefoot on the dash board" at the corner of here and there is the best way to be stranger darlin' |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice write. I particularly like the first verse: "the nights are longer now that the days have shortened and waiting for you is a line of ticking clocks talking useless" Embrace the shadows. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks little one for the eyes ___________ ms mar, thank you for touching this one ___________ ms suesea, thanks babe for your eyes ______________ ms leej, thanks lady friend for the read and reply ______________ ladyone, thank you for the ride along ______________ connel friend, thank you for the read |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark... very very nice, and very very you! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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