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Open Poetry #41

sack cloth in dagotown

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-11-05 06:39 AM

my fingers are anti-climactic yawnderers
just making circles around imaginations
that they hold up to the pathless eyes

I wait at the doorstep of a human pound
for some worthy crypt to become aware
of the pity of my dancing boot winds

and offer me the privilege of patronage
in the well of her soul sighted womb
there to waste my salvation's crumbs

on the concrete eyes of ravens
hindering the smooth face of shawdows
with their jutting wings shuffeling

lifeless as the breezes without their fires
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daark

scriblenote: ride thru of fire area in san diego..

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2007-11-05 08:40 AM

I can sense the true forms of lifelessness
there through your eyes and pen, dark one

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-11-05 08:51 AM

that must have been sad to see...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2007-11-05 06:38 PM

thanks ladies...yes a bit of a mess there

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2007-11-07 07:40 PM

Mr Daark... again I enjoyed your words here.. a very sad write - I have been having good thoughts for all who are caught up in the fires.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2007-11-08 06:17 AM

ms R & B, thanks lady friend

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-11-08 02:53 PM

speaks loudly
and well

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2007-11-08 04:43 PM

thanks lady one

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