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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
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Belfast, Ireland

0 posted 2007-11-08 05:11 AM



I am free to wonder worry and wait
Chained to abstraction like I am
Clusters of nonsense thrive like viruses
Feeding of perfectly good eyes
I am free to die not live

© Copyright 2007 Brian Rooney - All Rights Reserved
PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
Posts 87

1 posted 2007-11-08 06:12 PM


Very awe-striking poem.
It makes you think of what kind of world we actually live in.

Beautiful words reign in your mind.

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