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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2007-11-07 03:36 AM


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in treetops gleaming

sunshine makes one last promise

in time to return

©2007 by icebox
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© Copyright 2007 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-11-07 04:02 AM


So beautiful!
Love,
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-11-07 05:32 AM


lovely writing, and I am glad I live where the sun does shine more often than not.

M

Martie
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California
3 posted 2007-11-08 12:01 PM


The jewels on the leaves of trees, makes the rain worth the sun's magic.  
Joe Houck
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california
4 posted 2007-11-08 12:22 PM


Haven't read a haiku in a long time.
I liked this.
Joe

iliana
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USA
5 posted 2007-11-08 02:20 AM


A very beautiful and peaceful picture arises in my mind's eye here.  I do so like haiku when it takes us into the moment like this one!  : ) ......jo
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-11-08 05:39 AM


Mr Ice... very beautifully expressed! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2007-11-08 07:06 PM


and this is just one of my favorite things...


secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
8 posted 2007-11-08 07:31 PM


a most fine 'write!'

serious and sustained applause!

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