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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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a soft autumn breeze sweeps fine cirrus around the roof tops emerging images melt in daytimes lost then through pastels gentle twilight fleeting dreams on wind of wing soft singing you can rest assured as best you can their cloak of evenin' hangs believin' on the cusp of an Aquarian tide dappled by the dews of collected thinking trying languid sea in dull of dance plankton shifts to spellbound trance sliding riding tangled in sighs encumber tendril's break from perilous trouble where tarried deep in currents under dare I discovered wander posing as a member of the gentry - you know how I miss her performance..? Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ [This message has been edited by lucky (11-07-2007 09:12 PM).] |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I love it when a lovely essence lingers on my mind soft as summer's breezes writing my heart in poetry and melody, poignant as Zamphir's pan flute. This poem is like that, and I felt caught in the evanescence of a blithe spirit. ~KL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dale....How lovely you know it within your heart. Hug! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I discovered wander posing as a member of the gentry - you know how I miss her performance..? hello, this is the 2nd of yours I have read, and quit marvelously executed...a read well worth reading.... thank you |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
How incredibly beautifully constructed! The flow of your words glides with such ease with each new line.... I have much to learn!!! Illusive X |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Klassy Lassy thank you so much... hope to see you again..! - - - - Martie Always a pleasure... letter is in the making as we speak... 20 degrees this morning... Brrrr..! hugs & prayers sis. - - - - Leslie Hope it's OK to call you that. Thank you for taking the time to read me. Hope to see you again. - - - - illusive angel Thank you so much. If you want to learn, Pasions is probably the largest poetry site I know. Most of my writings in this format I call "key hole writings" If you need any help give me a jingle. I still have a few ideas. Love you all best friends best finds dale |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I should have told you this sooner, but in the earlier years of Pip, your writing was a big influence for me. (I'm pretty sure it was you that made me a fan of enjambment, and I started utilizing that little tool m'self out of sheer admiration.) I'm very happy to see you here again, lucky. Lucky, even!  Thanks for the traipse through your eyes. |
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