Open Poetry #41 |
Beyond the Mirror |
Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Beyond the Mirror My thoughts travel through and beyond, wondering when those feelings will rise to the occasion. The passing of time resonates in loneliness, leaving one to capture a reflection in thought. Still, the warmth of memories comforts my will and revives the discipline needed to cover the scars of the past, to change false hopes into dreams of reality, to leave the old view behind and begin again to see that patience is a virtue... and that beyond the mirror, there is truth. ~A~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and that beyond the mirror, there is truth. truth will always be there.. nicely expressed my friend... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very nicely expressed indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I love it when Alice dons her poetic finery and comes to call~ Always a ponder you leave me with~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Alice, Couldn't help but see an old reflection here. dale |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Guess I should say "how depressing it was to find how there was nothing on the other side of that mirror." (That wasn't here already) quote: ...beyond the mirror, there is truth. I think I would have used a different word here instead of "truth" (maybe "reality") I don't know. But,,, truth. All I'm saying is, I've looked beyond, and not found truth. Did I say I liked it..? You betcha bubba..! dale |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
well Dale, compared to what I see in the mirror every day, I know there is more to reality and truth than what I see in front of me thanks, ~A~ |
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