Open Poetry #41 |
Blended In Blues |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
There are these strands of blue that weave shades of midnight through the soul, with threads carefully placed stitched just so as if to entwine the azure blue of sky, binding it to the deeper cobalt darkness where shadows are cast against the light of day as two hues bump into each other accidentally, on purpose so that our colors can blend onto the canvas of day. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
where shadows are cast against the light of day as two hues bump into each other accidentally, on purpose so that our colors can blend onto the canvas of day. You developed the theme very captivatingly, dear Donna. Minus minus equals plus, I would say. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Divinely creative write. Simply stated, yet metaphorically stunning! Donna, your pen spills angel blue ink! Love & Azure Light, Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
n-joyed it ms gs... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"as if to entwine the azure blue of sky, binding it to the deeper cobalt darkness" oh, Donna...I really like that! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...just got home and before cooking dinner thought I'd pop in real quick for some reading and upon seeing this had to say how pretty I thought it was... jwesley |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Such golden threads you have spun through shades of blue, to blend the seas and heaven of heart. I wanted to swirl my fingers in your wordpaint. ~ KL |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful blending Hope |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely and very creative, GS. Ida |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ooooh, this is pretty...and a great exercise in blue! *hugs*....jo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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