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Beneath My Pale Gray Sky
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Beneath My Pale Gray Sky |
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Arkarian New Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 9 |
The tide of youth is changing Just like the way you lie The children separate me As too the wind, they fly Both anxious and reluctant The storm comes walking through And pushes all the birds from grace To speak the end to you The tear drops of the broken Drip from a tortured eye And silence goes unspoken Beneath my pale gray sky [IMG align="center"]http://www.imhaven.com/forumsigs/gaylib.jpg[/IMG] [/URL] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptionally well written. Welcome to Passions. I'm sorry I missed this the first time. Powerful write. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And silence goes unspoken Beneath my pale gray sky" ~ A very good closing to your poem! Very descriptive and I found myself steeped in unspoken silence beneath a pale gray sky.  EA |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
A great read. liked it very much. |
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