Open Poetry #41 |
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Missing |
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Orchid New Member
since 2007-10-27
Posts 4Colorado, USA |
Missing You never came home I searched for you everywhere Did you leave? Did you die? I see your face in strangers Only my soul knows you now Did you leave? Did you die? Hear my cries Listen to my dreams Did you leave? Did you die? No words make sense Only memories of your voice Did you leave? Did you die? Rising out of sleep Believing you are there Did you leave? Did you die? I scent your skin My spit turns to honey Did you leave? Did you die? My deepest fear surpassed Oblivion-no burial no goodbye Did you leave? or Did you die? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome, orchid, to piptalk and our circle of friends! This poem is so filled with raw emotion, that I would wager, this is an expression of what you actually experiencing. I empathize with what you are going through. Giving you a compassionate hug, Earth Angel ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome Orchid. Your words give flesh to the sudden loss, torn from the fabric of us, without closure. Emotive and strong. Happy to have you join us here. TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome... a very deep and moving piece, if this is from a personal experiance, my heart goes out to you... Warm Hugs~ARH ![]() You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the blue pages. You will like it here ![]() Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Orchid New Member
since 2007-10-27
Posts 4Colorado, USA |
Thank you guys...check your e-mail. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
It's nice to see a new poet coming on line, you will be so glad you joined, warm welcome Orchid. Lindsay |
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