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A Feeling |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Every part of me sighs as thoughts cycle the memories wanting to feel that I am edging closer to the passing of the forever that never really existed. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Every part of me sighs You just made me sigh too, dear Maureen. I insist, FOREVER, exists. We only have this moment and it holds FOREVER too, seems a paradox, but I think it isn't. And if it does not exist for you now while you go through memories, it most certainly existed at that moment when you believed it to be true. It can be mind-boggling at times, but we are in the flow. See what you have started with your captivating ponderings? Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You and I, both. I know just how you feel. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, M! Your poem got me ta thinkin' and a ponderin'! ~ as is par for the course when it comes to your thought-provoking poetry! I would like to echo Margherita's thought-filled response! (Her wonderful interpretations are usually the same as mine ~ but her responses are more eloquent!)  Loving hug, Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmmmm. Wynter has written and I have read. I love it  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah yes, some forevers are only in our hearts and not the others, so we must find the heart that wants our forever...and be willing to risk a part of our forever, in pursuit of someone that will accept us and forgive us, care for us and sincerely believe in us...Forever is not only words it is action...and action can only be lived in today...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I guess it depends how long one thinks forever is...I think 37 years was long enough of one... although I thought it would be till the end of my time~~ thus the sigh~~ thank you for your interpretations. I enjoyed them all.  M |
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