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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-11-02 07:29 AM


A Cure for Loneliness

Last night
my honey came to me
and held me tight.

Last night
I could clearly see
how much she needed me.

Last night
I needed her too
because I needed
a cure for loneliness.

Last night
we cured
each others
loneliness.

JamesLee
01November
2007



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Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-11-02 07:52 AM


Wait a minit!  If there's going to be any curing going on its gonna be by Dr. Love

Well writ my friend.  

Needless to say, I love it!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-11-02 09:16 AM


Now that's the kind of cure that I'd like to use for whatever ails me!!!

~ and to think that you were able to do that without the help of our resident Doctor Love!


Linda

Shadow_Singer
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3 posted 2007-11-02 02:16 PM


A cure I would welcome, but have not available.  Well wrote.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-11-03 06:47 AM


can you pass some on to me James.. for safe keeping?   enjoyed..  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-11-03 05:45 PM


Thank you Interloper, Earth Angel, Shadow Singer and Roniece for the wonderful responses...Loneliness seems to come like a cup of coffee that has been poured and drinken...James
Margherita
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6 posted 2007-11-03 07:50 PM


A lovely thing to happen, dear James.
Curing each other's loneliness.
"Are you lonesome tonight? " you made me hear Elvis' song in my mind. I love that.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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7 posted 2007-11-03 09:30 PM



Sounds pretty good to me James, I hope it lasts. nice write, very romantic.

Lindsay

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