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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
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0 posted 2007-10-02 04:47 PM


Thread a needle
Dot an ā€œ iā€
Ask the question
Answer why
Know the reason
Have a clue
Care enough
Loving you



© Copyright 2007 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
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1 posted 2007-10-02 05:05 PM


Excellent.  Simple, short, extra good.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2007-10-02 06:26 PM


yes, excellent indeed
loved this....well done

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2007-11-03 12:39 PM


Your work has been the best kept secret for long enough.
Exceptional verse.  Potent, deep and resonant.
Write on Poet!

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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Oregon
4 posted 2007-11-03 05:33 PM


Sometimes the smallest details leave the biggest message! Rythmns of heart smiles in this one! ~KL
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-11-03 09:06 PM


When it comes to our loved ones, our paying attention to little details and the minutia, show how much one really cares.

This was a very sweet write!


Linda

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