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Halloween |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Down the street All the trees are finally In some degree of color This year It’s yet warm enough For open coats Though it’s certainly wise For everyone to have something on Just in case Still it’s hardly fashionable For a young woman To wear a kerchief Indoors on her head Unless she has no hair Now we feel The dark monk Is always with us The dominant participant In our days As if afraid direct words Might then provoke him We too are careful In what we say Go slow The leaves Are beautiful I love Autumn Yes I know See you soon Take care Yes of course And you as well . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Quite a conversation  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
that skeleton must be very enchanting. nice experience. enjoyed the warm poem Tomtoo |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
I love this poem truly. why do I feel that the title "Halloween" made a big black cloak on this poem? Why do you choose this title? Was it because it was Halloween Day or because you used it to hint that your poem was in Halloween culture which means playing around and having fun)? |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Both because it was the day I wrote it and to, on Halloween, contrast a reality to the fantasies of what is frightening and how it is dealt with. John . |
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