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lightkeeper
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pluto

0 posted 2007-11-02 06:06 AM


Stepping stones of life.
Does it matter if your feet,
get wet.


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lyricpoet
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1 posted 2007-11-02 06:19 AM


Nicely done.

Author Kevin Brian Wright 2007

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2007-11-02 08:05 AM


This is gr8!

Obviously, one must get one's feet wet in the walk of life.  The trick is not to drown

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-11-02 09:12 AM


Nope! A little water here and there, makes life a lot more interesting!

You are very good at writing these little snippets of wisdom!

Warm hug,
Linda

lightkeeper
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pluto
4 posted 2007-11-02 09:21 AM


ah yes indeed "Interloper" I guess part of the art of life is also in not becoming too Complacent without knowing how to swim LOL  

[This message has been edited by lightkeeper (11-02-2007 11:09 AM).]

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2007-11-02 03:37 PM


Life walking on stepping stones REQUIRES one to get their feet wet?..And maybe even muddy too? Metaphor poetry is always the best and you write it so very well sweety?

Thank you...

Love Phil.xxxxxxxxx

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-11-02 04:35 PM


Nice...James
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