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Shadow_Singer
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0 posted 2007-10-30 05:31 PM



Listen to the ringing
So many styles these days
Everyone is a different singing;
A call in your pocket,
A voice to cheer your day,
Someone you’re missing
When they or you are far away
And missing them makes you blue.

Oh, I’ve had the blues;
Ya know, they woke me last night,
But then I heard Your little tune,
And now I’m feeling alright;
I didn’t even have to wait till home,
We can talk while in the car,
We can be in touch where ever,
I push some buttons and there you are.

Ah technology
Got to love it,
Even if still a mystery.

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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-10-30 05:38 PM


Ah technology
Got to love it,
Even if still a mystery.


I couldn't agree more with you! This is lovely and so true.

Love,
Margherita






Shadow_Singer
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2 posted 2007-10-30 05:47 PM


Thanks Margherita, I was born before technology reared its head and like many of us older folks never really got it, but I’m learning.  Still I have learned to appreciate it.
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-10-30 05:49 PM


Ya really gotta luv it
Shadow_Singer
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4 posted 2007-10-30 05:51 PM


that you do, and i love getting responses also
thanks for yours

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-10-30 06:01 PM


I do believe that this is the first poem that I have ever on the subject of ring tones. What a novel idea! It worked out very well. Enjoyed!

Ring ding a lingy,

EA

Shadow_Singer
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6 posted 2007-10-30 06:02 PM


It just came to me and I answered it, thanks for the enjoyment you had and so I may have also.

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2007-10-30 06:18 PM


thank you   and yes it is amazing what a phone call can do~~

M

Shadow_Singer
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8 posted 2007-10-30 06:22 PM


Thats right, and now adays everyone has there own little tune.

miscellanea
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9 posted 2007-10-30 06:36 PM


"A call in your pocket,"

Yes!   Such interesting wording throughout!

Loved this!  And those ringtones... some are so cool and others are so demanding!  Neat
topic, BTW.   Oh, by the way, I don't think I've had a chance to welcome you to Piptalk.  It's great to have you aboard!  I'll be looking forward to reading more of your postings when I am able.  Again, WELCOME!

miscellanea

marcel
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10 posted 2007-10-30 10:12 PM


a technological sound piece!
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2007-10-31 03:52 PM


Yeah I really love giving irresponsible people an excuse to make noise...like when at a movie, and they get a call because they're too stupid to put their phone on silent, and then they leave the theatre three times to take calls...who said we raise spoiled children that think the world revolves around them...James
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