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The Four Hundred Year Clam
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The Four Hundred Year Clam |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I have felt nothing For more years Than you can imagine For me Love and hate are Less than anything Since I am merely being Your concerns Are no longer mine My life undulates With the tides Although Should you press me All that very hard I'd rather be Simply dead . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (10-30-2007 08:53 AM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Great title!! |
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Shadow_Singer Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 51 |
As long as there is music, a beat, or sound of something like a song, I would never rather be simply dead. Even lives blue is better than dead quiet. Hope things get better for you. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. http://www.foxnews.com/story/0,2933,306076,00.html . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your unique poetry can only be written by you, John. I couldn't enjoy it if you were "simply dead" and who would I spar around with on occasion? Ida |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
I agree, dear John. Ps The link is blocked in my place. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Simply sad. |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
I agree...so very sad. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Great poem. I confess. Until this moment, I've never really felt anything about a clam, but now I'm mad and very sad for the poor thing. |
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