Open Poetry #41 |
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The Witch's BroomStick |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
![]() The witch’s broomstick The night was calm, Not a goon in sight. The little old witch, Flew into the night. She held it tight, As the broom flew high. She said a curse, “Cursing you little brats to die” She cackled and danced Into the sky. But her old little broom Failed to fly. She fell and she fell, Down to the ground. The little old broom Made not a puff or sound. The witch was furious, Didn’t know what to do. She turned on the tele Because there was no one to BOO! “Wait!” screamed the witch. She got off of her seat. The tele shouted out, “This broom will put the fly in your feet!” “300 horse power, With a touch of leather. The new broom 3000, Is light as a feather. The witch screamed “YEAH”, As she phoned right in. “Yes I want one of those. Is it straight as a pin?” Happy witch got the broom, As they both flew off. She felt the leather. Oh dear, how soft. The broom ran out of gas, No broom station in sight. The witch screamed out loud, As she fell down in fright. “That’s it”, screamed the witch. “I am done with this broom! With one more fall, I will be meeting my doom!” So the witch went back, To the little old broom. It may not go fast. Not even a VROOM! The night was calm. Not a goon in sight. With her fingers crossed, She flew into the night. ARCTIC WIND HAPPY HALLOWEEN PIPTALK |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Nice write Arctic Wind and great immagination. Lindsay |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
Great comical poem with Halloween right around the corner |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A great fun write, dear Arctic Wind. You have a very eclectic poetic talent. Happy Halloween! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
lindsayP thank you, and happy halloween to YOU! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
X_X well, thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- would like to ride on the broom HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Artic Wind...I wanted to thank you for the comments you left on a few of my poems and to tell you that I think this one, delightful. ![]() |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Martie- why thank you and your welcome HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Very nice ARCTIC WIND. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
So the witch went back, To the little old broom. It may not go fast. Not even a VROOM! But at least with that she could clean her room! Now the witch goes out with a cyclone vac Dyson guarantees that she'll always get back! |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
Wide imagination... I like it and halloween is lucky to have a poem like this for celebration. I don't really know what halloween is all about, but I think I would like to watch some of the ceremonies done for celebration. Looks like fun. hehe ![]() Tears of Sanity~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
seeker- thank you happy halloween ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ivordavies- thank you happy halloween ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Tears- havent seen you in a while, thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JamesMichael- thank you james happy halloween ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww, AW, that was a charming Halloween poem! ~ Bewitching! Happy Halloweenie huggums 'n a Hershey's chocolate kiss, EA ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
cute, enjoyed the chuckle....poor witch, I feel sorry for her. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea thank you, i am glad you enjoyed the poem ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
magnus- thank you, and the witch is fine HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The night was calm. Not a goon in sight. With her fingers crossed, She flew into the night. ~~enjoyed your broomtale ![]() M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
nakdthoughts- Thank you, it was fun writting this poem HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and back to the top for the Season's at hand! ![]() |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
sunshine- thank you so much HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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