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BirdeeB
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since 2000-09-16
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0 posted 2007-10-29 05:29 PM



I wear my heart on my sleeve
what a peeve just leave conceive why

can't believe
slowly deceive

Twisted whispers
fill my head wanting
to be dead so full of dread
Desperate for time

To want whats mine
slowly decline a moment in time to hear
a chimem whispered
ever.....sooo

slight

hold tight

breath

full of fright

escape far away

from night
go

go!

into

LIGHT



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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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1 posted 2007-10-29 08:03 PM


Loving the title!  Not only does it have a nice sound to it, but it gives a real visual...  

  I don't think I've welcomed you to PipTalk yet.   It's nice to read your poetry.  I hope you like it here as well as I have.  

~misce'

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2007-10-30 09:18 AM


Welcome home, Brandi. It's been a long time!






Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-10-30 02:10 PM


"I wear my heart on my sleeve
what a peeve just leave conceive why"

~ Perhaps that is because you are very trusting and loving person!


EA

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