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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2007-10-29 06:06 PM






Soaring like an eagle but your young
toes are still stuck in this red clay
I think your conscience faded in the
rearview mirror as you raced off
Blind anger and rage that always seems
to bubble up out of nowhere
Slowly replaced with long forgotten
memories of old quarrels and spite
Words are slaps that cannot
be taken back...cannot be soothed
Easier for you to stay away if love is pushed
aside constantly giving way to the negative


Meanwhile, what do I tell the others here
who miss you so badly?


"Ma'am?"


I said, what shall I tell the others?



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1 posted 2007-10-30 09:19 AM


OhTina~
How poignant are these thoughts~

I hope those who make fast tracks down the road come to know that the same road always leads back home~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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TinaTrivett
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2 posted 2007-10-30 10:57 AM


Me too Marge...and no sooner had I written this, and he came home.

((hugs)) back 'atcha.

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3 posted 2007-10-30 01:59 PM


"Easier for you to stay away if love is pushed
aside constantly giving way to the negative"

~ Yes, that may be the easiest way, however, it is seldom the best way. As I read in one of the replies that you wrote, he did return home to Geogian clay! I suppose he came to realize (as did Dorothy in the Wizard of OZ) "There's no place like home! There's no place like home!"

May your home be one of mutual love, respect,  harmony and JOY!

Loving, healing hugs to all,

EA


TinaTrivett
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4 posted 2007-10-30 04:07 PM


Thank you EA. Today has been a blessed day.
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