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Misty Mauve Mountains |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Misty Mauve Mountains A haunting soulful melody rises from the moonlit shores of a lost lagoon, then soars above misty mauve mountains to mingle with ancient whisperings in mystic mourning winds. I turn my face into the bewitching breeze to better hear the distant tremolo of a loon dancing on the winds of time in synchronicity with all who’ve gone behind the veil of endless night into pure-forever light, merging future with past, in a magical place where all the walls of indifference crumble into nothingness, and all become as one, in eternal cosmic dust. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
WOW! (and I seldom use that word)... simply superb! I especially LOVE: "A haunting soulful melody rises from the moonlit shores of a lost lagoon, then soars above misty mauve mountains to mingle with ancient whisperings in mystic mourning winds(!)" most serious, long-sustained applause!! [a poetic 'standing ovation' for this grand-fine 'write!'] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you brought me there with you into the mystic  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
What an enchanting write Midnitesun, top accolades for that one. Thanks for sharing. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
in a magical place where all the walls of indifference crumble into nothingness, and all become as one, in eternal cosmic dust. Dear Kacy, you have been beautifully inspired to write this magical piece. Of course I hope that from that nothingness and cosmic dust, new creation will endlessly take place. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanking you Bruce, Mish, Lindsay, and Margherita for your warm replies! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy....hi! I want to be there...loving the loon whose tune I've never heard.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"in a magical place where all the walls of indifference crumble into nothingness, and all become as one, in eternal cosmic dust." Kacy - I hope it's a very large place because I'm sure many of us want to go there. I sure do! Tremendous write! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Oh ! This is at once magical, artful, transporting, and completely in focus and true. Beautifully written, Midnightsun, and thoroughly enjoyed!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice painting Kacy....love the words, and of course my favorite bird, the Loon. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I came back for another 'official read and comment/reply post' on this write! wonderful! continuing major applause!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
where all the walls of indifference crumble into nothingness, and all become as one, in eternal cosmic dust WOW! Well said! Much enjoyed. miscellanea |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
Excellent write!!!!!!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
All these wonderful replies just serve to prove that walls of indifference really do crumble when we give and receive with open minds and hearts. Thank you each, for taking time to read and reply! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
My favorite of all your lovely poems, Kacy. Very Inspirational. Ida |
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