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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Your sound ** * Every single word you utter plays a different chord and key deep inside me where I keep the whole musical scale to sing my cosmic song, where connections are orchestrated worldwide and impulses radiated far beyond the known itineraries. You generate the tune that ties me to your soul, you beat the drum that makes me ache for the touch of you. You produce the sound that urges my feet to move and my heart to dance along. You set the scene where we fly over parquets with no memories dusted with our new breath born upon this moment that holds everything… that holds you and me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
His sound played in harmony with your sound, makes for a glorious symphonic sound of love.  I adore the cosmic beauty of your poetry. I am always smiling throughout my reading ~ and experiencing ~ of every poem that I read. Love to you, Marvelous Margherita! Angelo Terrestre |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"You generate the tune that ties me to your soul, you beat the drum that makes me ache for the touch of you." Only a very special person can do that. Yes, the sound is definitely love. A truly romantic and loving write, Margherita. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...classical music opens the door to my emotions...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Goodness....Muy Bueno.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most pleasant 'write'! I am particularly fond of: "deep inside... where I keep the whole musical scale to sing my cosmic song, (with) connections are orchestrated worldwide" [that certainly sounds like a fine expression of the cosmic perspective ("Universalist" Paradigm!)] The ending is especially good as well! Applause! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Lovely poem Margherita, delightfully written. much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, you capture the core of an ocean here of a tree, of the sky, enjoyed it ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Poet friends for the kind replies! Love, Margherita |
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