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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-11-13 02:25 PM


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The water has risen
Over time to cover
All the now old houses

Winds on stone
On those we knew
Have worn away the names

Light shines on
And through the leaves
Remaining on autumn branches

Still the leaves are falling
The forest in growing silence
They are falling all the time


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-11-13 03:37 PM


Loved the title and tone of this one John
Well done.

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