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Riding the Wind
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Riding the Wind |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Riding the Wind Hopelessness rides the wind tonight with little, but chilling air. Position lacking in the weave of life, and a heart too heavy to bear. A nightmare it seems has entered my world, mirrored fear when seen. Oh how I miss what I do miss when living this life in between. No one knows the hurt or losses the empty of years once held... With no one there to pick-me-up in those moments when I'm felled. I never ask, as I plod along, but the pounding thoughts do scare. Oh how I miss what I do miss when life was once to share. Seasons seem the same to me, my mood a living blue, as Alice shys away from time, closing her eyes to the view. Reflections bring a startled look, a glass distorted sight. We sit together, Alice and I, riding the wind tonight. Alice And I~~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Very nice read, Nakd. I enjoyed this. Type II poet. Its worth the work. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very touching write, dear Maureen, this solitude so profoundly rendered. May you feel warm, sending a hug. Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
nice read ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done M.. nice flow and rhythm... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen......You seem to do this so effortlessly...with the rhythm and rhyme so fine. The feeling touched me too...I wish all well with you.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most obviously a heart-felt 'write'!... Hopelessness rides the wind tonight [a most powerful line that!... It has been said… "there is no ‘death’ worse than the loss of all ‘hope’!”] Most assuredly, I can relate to this penning… [as my ‘reality’ is that ‘living blue!’] applause for the sincere realism! |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
Oh I thought this was so cleverly done and enjoyed it thoroughly!! Excellent! Illusive xx |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
You write so well! Your poetry always has such a nice flow to it! The wind IS a little nippy this week. Wishing you warmer days. misce |
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