Open Poetry #41 |
The fox went out on a moonlight night? |
ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
The witch flew out on a moonless night, prayed to the devil that there'd be no light for many a soul would lose the fight as she came swooping down low and cursed them with a spello! But the witch knew not that her end was near and she'd meet one who had no fear. for she's counted not on the strength of beer that one had swallowed down oh and it's he she tried to follow. As she swept down with a swish of her broom our drunken lad staggered and avoided his doom. As the haggard old witch saw the pavement loom she didn't have time to turno and joined in the devils inferno. So if you like beer and I guess you do you may swagger and trip and fall down too but worry not if a witch wants you for I guess you'll then not feelo any spell a witch could dealo. Excuse this verse cause I'm very tired and I'm working still for I've not retired and I really can't afford to now get fired so I thought I'd pop in quicko to remind you I'm still hearo! Happy Halloween....have fun The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
happy halloween ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you are toooo much! Too many Guiness doubles... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LOL...I know that song from years ago...and couldn't mistake the beat no matter how you changed the words....really like what you did with that old fox tune. Thanks! |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
Oh such fun!!! This was so different and has brought a smile to my face!!!! lol, illusive.x |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivor! You've been missed! I am so glad that you let us know that you are still "hearo" by way of this humourous Halloween poetic treat! Happy Halloweenie hugs to you! Linda |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Hi Ivor I think this was one of mums favourites while sat knitting and rocking Ray and Linda to sleep at night one foot on each rocker... expert from years of practice with the foot pedals on the Singer Sewing Machine Old Mother flip flop jumped out of bed And out of the window she poped her head, Oh, John, John, the great goose has gone And the fox has run away his Den-o. Den-o, Den-o, The fox has run away his Den-o. err or similar Eric |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I enjoyed your poem Ivor, I had quite a chuckle, thanks for sharing. Lindsay |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Thank you all for your responses, I wrote this straight to the site when I popped in for a quick visit as a bit of fun. If anybody is interested in the original version with words and audio track you can follow this link www.songsforteaching.com/folk/thefox.htm Thanks again Ivor |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
I see Mum must have had her own version.... Eric |
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