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Time's Indifference and Love's Abandon
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Time's Indifference and Love's Abandon |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Time’s Indifference and Love’s Abandon Beyond the last clear call of sunset, an impatient sadness… follows the fading footsteps of twilight passing, (through the soft, sweet stillness of the night) tempting lonely hearts to remember all that ‘should have been’, forever lost… to Time’s indifference and Love’s abandon! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well penned, poet! The bittersweet side of love somehow tastes sweet when written with such passionate tenderness! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...indifference and abandon...boy, if that doesn't say it all. Well written my friend. jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Another great poem I can relate to, Bruce  M |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Such profound sadness beautifully expressed. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"tempting lonely hearts to remember all that ‘should have been’, forever lost…" too true  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
an impatient sadness yes and it often stays until well after daybreak |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
forever lost… to Time’s indifference and Love’s abandon'''' ~~ understanding this ...  ~~**~~ |
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