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Open Poetry #41

'Skye' Island

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-07-22 07:37 PM

        ‘Skye’ Island

Beneath an envious sunset…
wind-kissed clouds and
    brooding mists
tease the verdant cliffs
and cascading waterfalls,
that merge in infinite grandeur
with a fine-eternal sea
of crystal blue and lavender…
as wayward, vagabond souls
of saints and salleemen
    run free…
through the infinite meadows
   of time!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2007-07-22 07:52 PM

Oh, now this fine piece rocks!!!

"brooding mists" and "infinite meadows of time"

BRAVO!!!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2007-07-22 07:59 PM

Bruce,

I so enjoy your poetry.

Thank you!

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

3 posted 2007-07-23 04:46 PM

This sounds like a fairy-tale land, a landscape of the imagination, beautifully drawn.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

4 posted 2007-07-23 05:01 PM

Beneath an envious sunset…
wind-kissed clouds and
brooding mists

your descriptions are beautiful, Bruce~~

M

The Lady
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The Southwest

5 posted 2007-07-23 09:35 PM

once again
an enviable poem Bruce

suthern

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Louisiana

6 posted 2007-07-24 09:11 AM

It is hard to do justice to such beauty... but your words do that and more... they take me there. *S* Beautiful write!

Hyaunt
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since 2007-07-12

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7 posted 2007-07-24 12:56 PM

it needs a little bit brain and knowledge to understand and appreciate your poem, sir. Beautiful.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2007-07-24 06:14 PM

merge in infinite grandeur
with a fine-eternal sea
of crystal blue and lavender''''

really what a beautiful merge!

you paint it like no other!

~~**~~
Life is a balance
of holding on and letting go (KU)

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