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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2007-11-14 11:17 PM


Meteor Shower


You love like stars at night
of countless millions shining
moving along at light speed
toward celestial’s ocean shore
and lost on the solar wind
here I watch your vast expanding
as a fleeting spectral shower
a voyager lost in space
waiting agelessly for the tide
this time I fall between the orbit
quandary of desire and the infinite
and I feel your gravity
am I waxing or waning
a radiant man eclipsed



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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2007-11-15 12:51 PM


Given the sparkle, I'd say waxing like a beacon.

Oh...lovely write.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-11-15 01:19 PM


"A radiant man" ~ in love! I felt a warm, cosmic rush as I read this outpouring of celestial adoration!

Oh, Robert, you ARE the "R" in Romantic!


Linda

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3 posted 2007-11-20 09:38 AM


Never shall the radiant be eclipsed...or missed.  Beautiful write.

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4 posted 2007-11-20 11:53 AM


a voyager lost in space
waiting agelessly for the tide

~*~

It's always wonderful to read you, Robert!


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