Open Poetry #41 |
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I wondered if she knew |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho ![]() |
it still feels like it was just a few minutes ago yet decades had passed since that time the place still had that century old benevolence somber pines didn't look to have aged a day late dawn had left us a misty ground speckled with crackling I could smell cedar wafting on airs from far away chimneys a woman talked to a shadow as she went about tiding up and I wanted so to say something but it didn't seem appropriate to be reminding any one of the transition we face between the here and after my wife snapped a couple of picks before I drifted back to the car a week or so later when the photos came back I was comparing them to the ones taken on our first visit that again I discovered the woman and there she was I wondered if she knew I'd only been once to see my mother..? *** Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ You gently wrap us in word tendrils, gathering us in your thoughts~ I like this one very much~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I too enjoyed this, my friend. j. |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
This goes so far beyond the frequent PiP nonsense that I'm stunned. Don't know how you do it, but you do it again and again. Best, Jim |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
excellent thoughts, well expressed. "late" |
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