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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there was nothing there before and then some sun and water and a memory seeped from still I remember it from this side although I didn't know I was there just perhapsing perhaps and then got some on me and then that tomorrow when the sun went under too there were dark places deep as the knees of empty they were my favorite shoes I wore them until I was young and after the oldness wore off until that yesterday became today and I am still from the wandering place ___________ author unknown but daark wrote it __________ scribblenote..a highway view of conception? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
your wanderings my friend, are a wonder... author might be unknown, but Daark definately wrote it.  Really enjoyed this conception!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oooh what wonderful words you write Mr Daark... enjoyed  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"author unknown but daark wrote it" ~ and daark is most notably known for his clever ingenuity and creativity ~ with a bit of sensuality thrown in for good measure. Love your "stuff", EA  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling "from stuff" That's so...cute. It reminded me that my nephew's answer to the question, "Where do you live?" was a simple "Erf." You let us the little boy in you, and that is sooooooooo sweet.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...but daark wrote it. Indeed, he did. Thanks so much for ringing in with a ring so true to you. It's very much some stuff from... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Well, you are right far, far away ... but what a wonderful peek I have had. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Some pretty amazing things come from "stuff". there were dark places deep as the knees of empty |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks pipbabes!! you all make me smile and glad I am here and not where I was when I was in whatchamacalletvillecity |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: YES! I love it, the depth and the beauty of it. Another one to savor more than once! Love, Margherita |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
You write from the depth of your soul. Love it! hugs, Marti Home is not where you live, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Clever stuff... I expected nothing less."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
from the wandering place. Me too. Staked and tied by my own cowardice, but that's my place too. Love to read you. Love the way you use language. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
"they were my favorite shoes I wore them until I was young and after the oldness wore off until that yesterday became today and I am still from the wandering place" I am so loving this...your words are wonderful. Thanks you! Patricia |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ah you guys...you make me ache with smile side wideness..thanks to each of you for your replies..it was a fun gig for sure |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I really enjoyed your play on words here. A fun read! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks so much Rosemary |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Daaark I almost forgot how much like your poetry,...there is soemthing to be said about the urgency of the wanderer, isn' there, though I don't feel any urgency. I like it....and I will....smile that is.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (12-09-2007 12:04 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bravo, bravo! Liked your take on the challenge, Mr. Dark Stranger.....*smiles*...jo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel...thanks lady with wings _____________ ms ili, thanks so much for the read |
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