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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-12-08 09:27 AM


from under the velvet mouthing
of our whispering considerations
there to be the sky blue simmering
before our lava laughter
of the jacks on jills of love

appearing nightly in dreamer's hands
queenless kings and kingless queens
playing our deuces gone wild
without the playful prayers
that our jokers would never cry

we were the twin givers giving
always with empty handed hands
closing fingers around the sands
that had more water than rivers
but still they craved the moisture

of another perhaps in time to deal
something of a two of a kind
a pair of aces face to face
and back to back well beyond
just the shuffeling of our souls

as we left our decks markless


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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-08-2007 12:43 PM).]

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-12-08 02:46 PM


I read and read.  

Words dropping from my lips into beautiful phrases, creating thoughts among drifting images.

And I read and read.

Alison

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2007-12-08 02:51 PM


ms az, thanks babe...your deal..(grin)
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2007-12-08 06:01 PM


Your words are like electrical impulses ... they are alive and they knock one out of slumber ... to become aware of anotherworld beauty that moves to tears.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-08 06:11 PM


dark-

Another enjoyed write from you!

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2007-12-08 09:10 PM


your words Mr Daark... held me close to the very end... wonderful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2007-12-09 07:20 AM


ms mar, thanks to you lady of dream places


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friend artic, thanks so much for the read


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ms R & B thanks babe for the eyes

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