Open Poetry #41 |
Moment to Moment |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marcia Thinking of you and times that are missed, years of ago when couldn't resist the meeting of words seen through look in the eyes. Thinking of you brings heart-breaths of sighs. Remembering times in morning's review, on the brink of tomorrow when feeling blue, repeating to self to quiet the mind. Remembering times when your hand I would find. Lost in this maze with no end to foresee a "circle of seasons" readying for me, viewing the past and the future's "might be". Lost in this maze waiting tirelessly. Moment to moment thoughts rise with each sigh, clinging to memories bringing tears to the eye. Tomorrow's of yesterday, once shared by your touch leaves each moment to moment in missing you much. M (thinking of you~~missing you) "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hugs, You convey these emotions, moment to moment, so very well. Hard to fill that hollow spot, where once warmed by a loved one. Have a good day |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So very poignant, dear Maureen. Beautifully rendered pain and longing. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So nice. JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
as sweet and beautiful as it is longingly sad Hugs, Robert |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Feeling this deep in my heart--to the core. Very nice write lady! "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
obviously, a most heartfelt and emotive 'write'! applause!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you. Missing my sister, someone whom I could always discuss "things" with. M |
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