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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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in those whisper times when you leave the proper behind in the other room perhaps I hear your tip toe sounds and I see the shimmering as pale plays with dark entering and exiting slowly seducing but hurrying because the lovely agony is hungry to feed again on something invisible without a name but with words in perfect order but random as your animal learns to talk and as mine begins to listen until we are whispered speechless ____________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*thud* Thats me hittin the floor...you just floored me with thisun DarkDaddy...and I loved it. *kotc* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
these whisper times are extremely captivating! Love, Margherita |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Even whem I am flitting your words have a way of stopping me holding me still for a moment making me smile and transporting me to a world I see through your eyes Alison |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"as your animal learns to talk and as mine begins to listen until we are whispered speechless" seems so familiar to me so lovely |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks for the eyes lady friend, you bless me with your touch ______________ ms mar' thank you for reading and wearing the words in your mind. ______________ ms az, it is always a treat to have your look under the hem of my pen, thank you babe _______________ ladyone, ou bring cocoa to my coffee, thank you for your eyes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Whispers can be loud and lingering... wonderful light Dark! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thisdiamond, thank you for the read |
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