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LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

0 posted 2007-09-26 10:37 PM

DAWN IN THE BUSHLAND

Little birds wake up with a twitter
As the dewdrops glisten on grass,
The silence of night seems to shatter
As the darkness lifts up it’s mask.

The possums head for their hollows,
As a fox eats the last of it’s feast,
Then heads for it’s den in the ranges
While the sky glows bright in the east.

The magpies warble’s a tonic
To those who are up and abroad,
And the kestrel’s cry from up in the sky,
Strikes high, on a musical chord.

Another day is at dawning
As the sun peeps over the trees,
The last traces of darkness seem to vanish
Like smoke drifting away on a breeze.

For it is dawn in the bushland
And of all places I’d sooner be there,
To hear the bellbird’s cheery good morning,
Ringing clear in the still morning air.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2007-09-26 10:58 PM

Such a nice poetic portrait, great write!!

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

2 posted 2007-09-27 12:04 PM

Thanks JL your comments always appreciated.

Lindsay

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2007-09-27 01:38 AM

Lindsey, I have never been to Australia but I feel like I have due to your beautiful, discriptive poems. I think I feel more of a poetic connection to you than anyone else on the site.
Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-27 05:11 AM

Fine writing...James

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-09-27 07:41 AM

Lindsay~
This is a delightful read~
You word-draw the imagery well~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2007-09-27 01:11 PM

I love your poem and dawn is also a favorite theme of mine.

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-09-27 09:10 PM

"Little birds wake up with a twitter"

i love to wake up to birds twittering with the morning sun rises!

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

8 posted 2007-09-27 09:15 PM

Ida, James, Marge and Margherita, I really

do appreciate your comments. I think one of the nicest things about writing poetry is when other poets read it and enjoy it and respond accoringly, my sincere thanks.

Lindsay

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

9 posted 2010-08-19 01:15 AM

The last stanza makes one wish that he could visit the bushland.

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