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Open Poetry #41

Sweet Lost Love

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-28 07:51 AM

Sweet Lost Love

"It rained
on the moon
last night,
the stars
got all wet
in showers
of regret."

Where are you?

Even the moon
and the stars
miss you,
wanting to hold
and to kiss you.

I'm yearning
for you,
my sweet
lost love.

JamesLee
29July
2007

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

1 posted 2007-07-28 07:52 AM

Love and longing so beautifully expressed

Hope

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-07-28 08:10 AM

yes indeed... enjoyed James

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-07-30 07:11 AM

Thank you Hope and Roniece for the nice responses...James

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2007-09-27 07:41 PM

This was very good!!!!!!!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-09-28 05:11 AM

Thank you WindWalker for the nice response...James

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