Open Poetry #41 |
Bridges |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
When I was a little girl I was very wary of crossing bridges. Steel structures spanning rivers Were ominous and scary. Sometimes I would dream of huge bridges That never seemed to end. In order to cross those bridges I would close my eyes and pretend.... To fly. But age and sorrow tend to ground us And gravity can be such a bother. I've learned how to build My own kind of bridges To keep from falling into the water. Ida Werrett |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'm still working on those bridges~~ *funny story* I had to take my Afghan dog to Phila. for an operation years ago and had to cross this bridge near Lancaster , PA in the fog..it seemed like an uphill bridge and I couldn't see the end of it nor the sides and was driving into low clouds over the river...thought I may be on my way to heaven M |
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Sekishu Junior Member
since 2007-09-17
Posts 36 |
I like this poem, it makes me think. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you so much for you lovely comments. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And now that al Qaeda is eyeballing some of our bridges for possible targets, and with some of our older bridges failing, it seems to take a certain amount of trust to safely cross a bridge...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I still am weary of crossing bridges. Especially when there are high winds and the big transport trucks go whizzing by. My uncle was one of the architects of the one that I cross over quite often and he used to say that he made sure that he made it extra strong so that I would be safe when I was on it. ~ Hey, I wonder if he was pertaining to my weight! lol May your wings fly you safely wherever you want to go. Enjoyed this little peek of you as a little girl. Linda |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It's good to build bridges in case you ever get grounded - but I hope you soar with the eagles forever. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your very nice comments. A few years ago I was watching television when that double decker bridge fell on those people during that earthquake in San Francisco. The "little girl" in me was terrified. We had crossed that bridge a year earlier on our way to Oregon. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
I really like this Ida, you have a very unique way of expressing yourself...seems to me to be straight from the heart. Thanks moon. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marchmadness- newbie to another, this poem is very well written, your doing very well ARCTIC WIND |
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