Open Poetry #41 |
Paradise Found . . . . (With my voice recording and Braveheart soundtrack) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Paradise Found Please Click Link above to hear music and my voice recording. Music: Braveheart Soundtrack Artist:Eleanor Fortescue-Brickdale Paradise Found ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ In misty gloaming of bonnie brae, A lad with a fife and a drum, Hailed his love for a lovely lass, Of them all, she was the plum. O’er hill and dale he searched for her, This maiden beyond compare. She stirred his blood like no other had, Of them all, she was most fair. One glorious morn at the break of day, He found her by shore of the loch, Singing so sadly of love she had lost, As tears soaked her emerald frock. Gold rays of sun lit up her form, Dresden skin was as fair as milk. Eyes reflected the blue of the skies, And her hair was of auburn silk. She heard the sound of the beating drum, Followed by the trill of the fife. Her sadness left with the sight of the lad, For she knew he’d be part of her life. He knelt and spoke before maiden fair, Recounting each search at cock's crow. How he’d spied her once on the bonnie brae, And had searched since that mome of ago. Her cheeks flushed the rosiest pink, The sparkle returned to her eyes. He swept her up and twirled her about, For in her he had found paradise. In misty gloaming of bonnie brae, A lad with a fife and a drum, Hailed his love for a lovely lass, Of them all, she was the plum. . Love is the unifying force which integrates one’s soul with that of another. ~ Linda L. Dowd |
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bel1e Senior Member
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~fantastic~ ~brava~
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Baby Girl ~ Thank you! You responded so quickly! ~ Unfortunately, I have to record it again because I said "Paradise Lost" at the beginning of the recording! Oh, sheesh-kabobs! Here I go again! Hugs to you! EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very much enjoyed this lil angel. Nicely done! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
OMG...as if the poem itself weren't spectatular enough combined with the lovely lilt of your voice when reading it I truly had thought I'd found paradise if only for a few moments. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful...what a beautiful reading voice you have and what a majestic poem you've written here. What a wonderful option you've given your readers with the voice recording. I read along with you as you read and it really brought your words home. ((((APPLAUSE)))) Ruth I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Donna Dearest ~ Thank you, m'dear! I'm pleased that you enjoyed it! Sending a hug-o-love, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Ruth ~ Your generous and enthusiastic response is one that I am saving to a folder where I keep my extra-special replies. Thank you so much, for this one! Loving hug, Linda |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep...an amazing voice. Wonderful voice-overs to exceptionally chosen music, Linda! Brava! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Sunshine ~ It was a labour of love! ~ and so much fun! (and also a bit tedious! ) Hugs to you, Dear Orb of Solar Light! ~ and thank you! Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Again I get no sound!Uuuuueeeeee But I enjoyed your wondrous poem greatly. You always lead me across beautiful valleys of romanticism. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
EA. So we can actually hear you? I unplugged the speaker to see if it was vibrating, as I can't hear for the moment. But ... ... manyana manyana. How do you put audio into a message? Jaime |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so beautiful and intoxicating and your voice is a perfect compliment to your words |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So gooooood! mmmm-mmmm! And not once did you say - "A" Loved it Linda. JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Earth Angel, What a beautiful poem congratulations on telling this lovely story. LindsayP |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Margherita ~ As you and I are kindred spirits, I, too, am disappointed that you are unable to receive the audio ~ especially for my angel poem. I know that that would be one that would really 'speak' to your heart. Love to you, my sweet friend, Linda Angelo Terrestre |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Jaime ~ Hi there! It was so nice to hear from you! As for posting the audio, you would have to upload a sound file from your computer to the net ~ a hosting site. I see that some poets have done it through thestartlitecafe.com. That probably would be the easiest root to take. Hugs to you, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Goddess ~ Good morning! That was a lovely reply to read ~ and I thank you! Have a gloriously goddess day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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JL ~ Howdy, Tex Man! Nice day, eh!?! lol It's always good to hear from you! ~ May your oil wells never go dry! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Lindsay ~ Thank you for saying so! Sometimes I surprise myself when I write in this manner. Mind you, when I do, it flows from me like sap from a sugar maple! lol I wish all my poetry was as easy to write as this one was. I was transported to another time and another place! I'm pleased you enjoyed it! Have a great day down under! EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Linda! Your words, your voice and the music... spectacular blend! Hugs & Luv, Nancy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Nancy ~ The enchanting poetess is back! I've missed you! I trust that you were spending some leisure time at your personal little shangri-la! I'm so pleased that you were able to catch this one of mine. Being that you are the ultimate writer of romance poetry, I knew that you would appreciate my efforts. Loving hug and a huge smile, Linda |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Aw, the make of my day, fair Angel! It's such a delight to read your poetry! So glad to read you again!!! I was looking so forward to hearing your voice, but could not get it to come up. Hm... I wonder where my sound card went! I think it still works... miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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misce ~ Aww, shucks! I was hoping that you'd be able to hear the audio. However, I am pleased that your peepers were able to read the poem! Love to you, Linda |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful just beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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1slick_lady ~ Thanks, Helen! I'm so pleased that you dropped by! Linda |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
wow, ill pick my jaw up off the floor now I am the little cracked mirror |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, a decided pleasure listening to you, Linda! Beautiful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hot Flakes ~ This 'angel' nurse is off to the rescue! Loved your response to my post! ~ But I sure hope that you didn't hurt yourself! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Bunches of Honey ~ Hi, Honey! I'm so pleased that you could get the audio ~ and that you liked it! Hugs to you, Helen! Linda |
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Chosen one Junior Member
since 2007-09-13
Posts 29 |
LINDA- Your voice is like the angels from the heavens it was a treat to here your voice reciting such a beautiful poem Love, chosen one |
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Chosen one Junior Member
since 2007-09-13
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Linda- your voice sounds like angels from the heavens when recided this poem what a treat to hear you WITH SMILES chosen one |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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chosen one ~ Hello, there! Welcome aboard the pip ship! Thank you so much for your sweet comments. They were very much appreciated. Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Linda |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had to load Internet Explorer to hear it but it was sure worth the time and effort. Loverly, and this is a real treat, and like Ruth, I read right along with you. Beautiful Linda. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Good evening, Mysterious One! Hi, Sharon! I do appreciate you taking the time and effort to load Internet Explorer to be able to hear the audio! I'm also pleased that you enjoyed my little production. I had alotta fun putting it all together. Warm hug to you this late summer's evening! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-15-2007 04:12 AM).] |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
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Linda, I finally got the sound to work! You are phenominal! I couldn't wait to hear your voice. I knew it would be magical and it was!!!! Hooray!!!!! misce' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
misce ~ Oh, I am so pleased that you finally got your audio to work. With these last few poems that I've "orchestrated", I kept hoping that you would be able to hear them ~ especially the poem about angels. Thank you so much for your enthusiastic response! You know that I always value your replies ~ and YOUR poetry!!!! Love to you! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-14-2007 10:28 PM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Linda You swept me away and took me to another land in another time. Thank you - this is beautiful. Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
aziza ~ Hi, Alison! I think I was in "another land in another time" while I was writing it! Truly! It's difficult to explain, but this poem practically wrote itself ~ and I'm the one that is getting the accolades! lol Often that is the case when I write these type of poems. Must be a past life thing! Love to you! Linda |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Fan-Tastic!and very much enjoyed adagio |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Adagio! Adagio! Wherefore art thou, Adagio? ~ Please excuse my moment! That is what I say every time that I see your name. lol Thank you for that "Fan-Tastic" response! It was good hearing from you! ~ Very good! Be happy! Be well! Be loved! EA |
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paradise islands New Member
since 2007-09-15
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Linda- you blew me out of the water when i heard your voice so ever sweet i love how sound like and angel, and bring such beautiful warming touches to your poetry. i especially loved "angels are all around us" please do continue Paradise islands |
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paradise islands New Member
since 2007-09-15
Posts 9 |
linda- i know i already relpied, but i cant get over the fact that is poem is not at the top, this should be the number one poem in the world i love this poem! sincerely paradise Islands |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Paradise Islands ~ Well, PI, YOU just "blew me out of the water" with your enthusiastic and highly complimentary comments. I understand that you used to belong to pip in the past and had the user name "sweat heart". I would like to welcome you back into the family fold! Thank you for your kind words and for reading and replying to my poem! I suppose the title "Paradise Found" would intrigue a poet with the name "Paradise Islands"! lol Giving you a warm, welcoming back hug, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paradise Islands ~ My goodness! You certainly know how to fluff up an 'angel's' feathers! Please forgive me if I seem to have forgotten when you were a member. Was it before my joining in August of 2002? Well, after your wonderful replies ~ I'm especially glad that you are back! I'll be looking out for a poem by you! Love & Light, EA |
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noobster Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 10 |
EA when i heard someon else's poem, that you can listen to them read it, well i had to see if anyone else did, i was so happy that you did by the way, i love Celtic music and anything do with that, i am think of writting a poem abou that |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I absolutely love this type of poem, It strikes a special cord within me. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
nobster ~ Hello, there! Welcome to piptalk! My roots are Scottish and Irish, so I love anything Celtic, as well. Thank you for dropping by and leaving such a nice reply! I will be on the lookout for your Celtic poem! Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ida ~ That was nice to hear! Thank you! May a gentle wind be always at your back! Love & Celtic blessings, Linda |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Adding my appreciation for all the work you are doing writing,speaking and adding the beautiful music.I have read and listened to all you write. Just out of the best words most of the time. "Late" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Late ~ Your kind comments regarding my creative efforts are highly gratifying ~ and much appreciated ~ and I send my sincere regards to you. Love & Celtic blessings, EA |
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