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Open Poetry #41

These Things I Like

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-09-12 01:30 AM

i like remote places
cool, sunny days
and hearing the silence
with each exploratory touch

watching the face change
listening to breath quicken
and slow kisses
as the wind brushes bared skin

Alison

[This message has been edited by aziza (09-12-2007 02:22 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-09-12 01:34 AM

Me likeee tooo!

Another sweet write from a sweet poetess!

Loving hug,
Linda

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-09-12 02:24 AM

Linda

You bring me so many smiles.

Alison

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2007-09-12 06:27 AM

remote places
like hollywood
and vine
during rush hour
and a stranger
with eyes closed

enjoyed your view ms

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-12 04:06 PM

Me too...James

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

5 posted 2007-09-12 05:29 PM

very good. Beautiful

enjoyed

Tomtoo

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-09-12 06:09 PM

concise and excellent 'write'

serious applause!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2007-09-12 06:51 PM

I feel the same...nicely expressed~~

M

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2007-09-12 07:36 PM

good read

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2007-09-12 10:28 PM

oh that silence Alison
says so much

beauty

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2007-09-13 12:17 PM

You know

another thing I like is you, and you, and you .. and you too .. I like it here and I thank you all for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed this poem.

xoxoxo
the liking lots Alison

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