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Open Poetry #41

This Time

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2007-09-12 07:51 PM

This time,
This way,
This day,
of our,

of love,
Where the days are here,
To belong my heart,

This time,
I have right to say,
All the way,

From a start,
From a heart,
This time,

Love shows a light,
To our love,
This time,

It can make it happen,
It can take it away,

This time,
I can feel your heart,
This time
It's gonna to our way

our day,
To shine our dreams away,
This time

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-09-12 08:30 PM

I loved how you ended this poem, so sweetly.

"our day,
To shine our dreams away,
This time"

~ Yes! This time is yours! Shine on! Dream on!

Warm hug,

EA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-09-13 06:27 AM

Enjoyed...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2007-09-13 06:37 AM

ms van, I enjoy watching you evolve here

Tears-of-Sanity
Member

since 2007-09-05

Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts

4 posted 2007-09-13 12:25 PM

This time~ I liked the poem very much

it has a deep meaning within ^^'

Tears of Sanity~

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