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Open Poetry #41
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-09-11 07:23 PM

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Running on cable above the road—

A single squirrel with his bushy tail
Indifferent to us all


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Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
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1 posted 2007-09-11 07:55 PM

I enjoyed this piece.
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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2 posted 2007-09-13 02:31 AM

Indifference, indifference, cold wind, dropping leaves----If I collected those words like collecting firewood for the coming season, I would freeze myself to death because of their perception.

I am shivering in your beautiful poem.

Tomtoo
Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
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3 posted 2007-09-13 09:50 AM

You have the right idea about squirrels.  Very nice.

Bobby
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